FOUR FEATHERS PRESS ONLINE EDITION: PANTOUM FESTIVAL Send up to three pantoums on any subject, totaling up to 150 lines in length, in the body of an email message or attached in a Word file to donkingfishercampbell@gmail.com by 11:59 PM PST on December 15th. No PDF's please. Color artwork is also desired. Please send in JPG form. No late submissions accepted. Poets and artists published in Four Feathers Press Online Edition: Pantoum Festival will be published online and will be invited to read at the Saturday Afternoon Poetry Zoom meeting on Saturday, December 16th between 3 and 5 pm PST.

Wednesday, December 13, 2023

Carl Stilwell AKA CaLokie

A Found Pantoum Poem from Mark 15:34 & Psalms 22 


Eloi, Eloi, lama sabachthani? *

My God, my God, why have you forsaken me? **

Why are you so far from saving me?

O my God, I cry out day and night but you don’t hear me 


My God, my God, why have you forsaken me?

All they that see me laugh me to scorn

O my God, I cry out day and night, but you don’t hear me

In you our ancestors put their trust, and you delivered them


All they that see me laugh me to scorn

Yet you are enthroned as the Holy One

In you our ancestors put their trust, and you delivered them

But I am a worm a reproach of men, and despised of the people


Yet you are enthroned as the Holy One

All they that see me laugh me to scorn

I am a worm, a reproach of men, and despised of the people

Be not far from me; for trouble is near


All they that see me laugh me to scorn

I am poured out like water, and all my bones are out of joint

Be not far from me; for trouble is near

You are my strength; come quickly to help me


I am poured out like water, and all my bones are out of joint

Deliver me from the sword

You are my strength; come quickly to help me.

I will declare your name to my people 


Deliver me from the sword

Rescue me from the mouth of the lions

I will declare your name to my people

In the assembly I will praise you


Rescue me from the mouth of the lions

Why are you so far from saving me?

In the assembly I will praise you

Eloi, Eloi, lama sabachthani? *


* In Luke 23:46 the gospel writer quotes Jesus last words on the cross, “Father, into Thy hands I commend my spirit.” 

** This quote of Jesus was from Psalm 31:5




A PANTOUM PRAYER FOR NADEEN


Eight people including 5-year-old boy killed by Hamas rockets fired into Israel.

Israel airstrikes kill close to 139 Palestinians, including 39 children.

“When I woke up I saw houses gone — nothing but dust.” *

Large parts of the Gaza Strip is left in rubble.


Israel has now killed about 219 Palestinians, including 63 children.

“They’re just kids. Why would you send a missile and kill them?” *

Large parts of the Gaza Strip is left in rubble.

Bodies of 16 women and 10 children are pulled from the debris.


"They’re just kids. Why would you send a missile and kill them?" *

U.S. President says Israel has the right to self-defense.

More bodies of women and children are pulled from the debris.

“The street? I don’t think it will go back to what it was.” *


U.S. President says Israel has the right to self-defense.

No electricity—waiting in dark for when next strike will come.

“The street? I don’t think it will go back to what it was.” *

All commercial areas are destroyed, so are the roads.” *


No electricity—waiting in dark for when next strike will come.

Palestinians live in open-air prison under air, land & sea blockade of Gaza..

All commercial areas are destroyed, so are the roads.

“There’s no place in Gaza that’s good for life.” *


Palestinians live in open-air prison under air, land & sea blockade of Gaza.

“What do you expect me to do? Fix it? I’m only 10.”*

“There’s no place in Gaza that’s good for life.” *

This 2021 war in Gaza followed those in 2008, 2012 and 2014.


“What do you expect me to do? Fix it? I’m only 10.”*

Nadeem Lateef’s 1st birthday was in 2012.

This 2021 war in Gaza followed those in 2008, 2012 and 2014.

A yellow canary lays crushed on the ground.


Nadeem Lateef’s 10th birthday was in 2021.

“When I woke up I saw houses gone — nothing but dust.” *

A yellow canary lays crushed on the ground.

Eight people including 5-year-old boy killed by Hamas rockets fired into Israel.


* QUOTES FROM 10-YEAR-OLD NADEEN ABED AL LATEEF

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